Hope For New Writers

Writing and getting published can be tough.  Are you a new writer trying to get published for the first time?  Are you a published writer trying to get published consistently?  Do your short stories keep coming back?  Ever receive a rejection notice that says: “We’ll pass on this.”  Or how about, “Thank you for your submission.  Unfortunately, it does not fit our present needs.”  Or how about: “We wish you the best in placing this else where.”

Try as you may, you can’t squeeze one drop of encouragement from most rejection notices.  If only an editor would tell you what you did wrong.  If only an editor would tell you what you did right and what needed to be done to make your story publishable.  If only if only if only.  It’s as if editors forget what it was like to try to get published.  Well, brother and sister writers and bloggers you’ve come to the right place. 

The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette offers free critiques and a chance at publication in the Gazette to all creative writers of the very short story, short short stories and fiction up to 2,000 words.  Just click on the Free Help For Writers tab at the top of the page and follow the instructions.

Useless, uninformative rejection notices can be a thing of the past.

Guy Hogan
Editor/Publisher

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The Gazette is always open to short story submissions.  Writers and bloggers should read and follow the submission guidelines.

Breaking Literary News

The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette has only been around seven months but already it has one of the best collections of short stories and articles on how to write short stories on the Internet.  You will also find flash commentaries on the days most important events.  Now that is news.  The publication is also open to submissions of fiction from 200-2,000 words and there is free help for aspiring and new writers.

So what are you waiting for?  Hours of literary entertainment is only a mouse click away.

Guy Hogan
Editor/Publisher

Time To Get Out

It’s nearly noon and I’ve posted one of my short stories and an article on writing dialogue so it’s time to take a shower (maybe even shave) and get out and get a newspaper on this sunny, balmy spring day in Pittsburgh a city I have lived in 62 years except for a stint in the army (Vietnam) and I’m on social security which allows me to blog all day even thought I’m going to have to figure out a way to supplement my income but right now I’m healthy and relatively happy and can’t complain about my life.

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is always open to creative writing (very short stories, short short stories and short stories) submissions.  Writers should read the submission guidelines before submitting.  There is also help for aspiring and new writers.  Just click on the Free Help For Writers tab at the top of the page.

Help With Writing Good Dialogue

Yes, it’s true.  Writing good dialogue is easier if you remember these things:

Each speaker must have a different agenda.  And don’t tell the reader what the agenda is.  The character’s dialogue will do that.

Each sentence a character speaks must provide the reader with important factual information about the situation or a hint at the speaker’s psychological landscape.  The ideal is that the dialogue will provide both.

There must be some sort of tension in the dialogue between speakers, either in outright conflict or at least innocent misunderstanding.

The best qualifier to describe how a speaker says something is, he said or she said.  If you feel you have to “tell” the reader how a character says something then you’re probably not writing good dialogue.  The emotion of how a character says something should be in the choice of words and the order of the words you put in the character’s mouth.  An exclamation point is enough to show extreme emotion but should be used as little as possible.

If you don’t follow the preceding suggestions then of course writing good dialogue will be very difficult.  Just think of your story as a drama, a theatre performance, as entertainment and you’ll be okay.

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is always open to short story submissions.  Writers (bloggers) should read and follow the submission guidelines.  There is free help for new and aspiring writers, too.  Just click on the Free Help For Writers tab at the top of the page.

The Good News (A Short Story)

James Parrish had signed a contract with a small, but well respected publishing house for his first novel.  He was a thirty-year-old second year MFA student at the University of Pittsburgh.  He phoned Philadephia from his off-campus apartment in Pittsburgh to tell his mother the good news.  He was sitting on the sofa.  Unexpectedly, his older sister Terri answered the phone.

“Oh, hi, Jimmy.  Well, I’m going to do it.”

“Do what?”

“You know.  Get the divorce.  I went over yesterday to try one last time.”

“You’re back home?”

“Where else am I and the kids going to go?”

“I guess I should call home more often.”

“He kept getting up doing things.  He couldn’t sit still.  He couldn’t look me in the eye.  Is gambling that important to him?  I make 35,000 a year.  He makes nearly three times that amount and we still live pay check to pay check.”

“I know.”

“You know what he had the nerve to say to me?  He’s been gambling since junior high and he’s not going to stop now.  Three kids and fifteen years of marriage mean nothing to him.  I give up.  I absolutely give up.  He’s never lifted a finger to help around the house.”

“I know.”

“The bank phoned two weeks ago and said if our mortgage fell another month behind they’d foreclose on the house.  The mortgage is his responsibility.  So what did he do with the money?  I had to come up with two months back rent.”

“He’s always gambled.”

“Yes he’s always gambled but nothing like this.  This beats all.  He’s sick.  He’s really sick.  He needs help.  Well, after yesterday the damn place can fall down on his fat head.  You should see it.  And you should see the lawn and hedges.  I hope the neighbors call the township.  I am so sick of it.”

He heard tears in her voice.

“Listen,” she said.  “I have to run Mom to her dental appointment before the kids get home.  You want to say a quick hello?”

“Sure.”  He waited.

“Hi, Jimmy.”

“Hello, Mom.”

“I was wondering when you would call.  I tell you never a dull moment.  Your father wouldn’t have put up with it.”

“It’s too bad about Terri and Greg.”

“That’s the one thing I didn’t have to worry about with your father.  He did his dirt like any other man but he aways did say a man was no man if he didn’t take care of his family.  In over forty years of marriage at least I didn’t have to worry about that.  I never would have thought it of Greg.  Oh, well, he’ll pay now.”

“You won’t be in the house by yourself any longer.”

“Being by myself never bothered me.  Okay, okay.  Gotta go.”

“Love you, Mom.”

“Oh, honey, I love you too.”

As soon as he put down the receiver the phone began to ring.  He stood, staring down at the ringing phone.  After a moment, he walked to the kitchen and brought back a glass and an open bottle of beer.  He sat on the sofa and drank the beer and waited for the ringing to stop.

The End        

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Vietnam in the Mist (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/Vietnam-in-the-Mist.643749 

The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is always open to short story submissions.  Writers should read and follow the submission guidelines.  New and aspiring writers can get a free critique of their stories.  Click on the Free Help For Writers tab at the top of the page.

Pittsburgh, Karaoke & Beer

My love of beer takes me to several bars in Pittsburgh.  Two of the bars I go to are Del’s and Nico’s.  Both are in Pittsburgh’s Bloomfield neighborhood which is known as “Little Italy”.  Del’s has karaoke on Friday night and Nico’s has it on Saturday night.  Over the years, I’ve sung karaoke at both places many times.  Lately, karaoke at Del’s has been anemic.  Karaoke at Nico’s is going strong.

Years ago, Del’s use to pack the karaoke crowd in every Friday night.  I was there every Friday night.  It was a wild scene.  They had some of the best singers in the city hanging out at the place.  Then the owners put in three very nice flat screen televisions in the small barroom where the karaoke DJ always set up.  Before, the bartender could turn down the lights.  With the three flat screen TVs on it was as bright as day.

At Nico’s the DJ sets up in the dinning room and the only screen that is on is the karaoke monitor.  The lights are kept low.  It’s all about karaoke.

No karaoke singer wants to compete with three, bright flat screen TVs even if the sound is on mute.

Nico’s has won the Best Karaoke Bar in the City Award from the Pittsburgh City Paper now three years in running.

Del’s is a fine Italian ristorante and it will survive and prosper.  Karaoke at Del’s may not.

The Death of Karaoke (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/The-Death-of-Karaoke.627745 

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is always open to short story submissions.  Writers (bloggers) should read and follow the submission guidelines.  If you want a free critique of your story, click on the Free Help For Writers tab at the top of the page.

Blogging In Pittsburgh

The news on the radio is about how many in Congress are pissed off (as the American people are) about how AIG is still going to pay millions of dollars in bonuses to its top managers as the company wants billions of more dollars in tax payers money to survive.

The Obama Administration is giving the public some “happy talk” in hopes of helping the economy and the stock market; and Pakistan, a nuclear armed nation, is on the verge of becoming a failed state.  While the Mexican Government is in a life or death struggle with the drug cartels.

There’s a lot to blog about: writing as therapy.

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is open to short story submissions.  Writers (bloggers) should read and follow the submission guidelines.  For a free critique click on the Free Help For Writers tab at the top of the page.

Writing, Thought & The Short Story

We humans are the only creatures on earth that have written language.  Written language is symbolic.  The word “chair” doesn’t look anything like a chair.  It is my contention that it is this ability to take an abstract symbol like the word “chair” and to match it up with a physical “thing” that makes us conscious.

But it is the ability to use written language as a symbol for things we cannot see, like the word “God”, that makes us truly human.

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is always open to short story submissions.  Writers (bloggers) should read and follow the submission guidelines.  For a free critique of your story click on the Free Help For Writers tab at the top of the page.

Cooking With Ham Hocks

This past weekend I finally got around to picking up a one pound bag of blackeye peas and three packages of ham hocks along with two red peppers.  After cleaning the peas, rinsing and cutting up the red peppers and rinsing the ham hocks I threw everything into the slow cooker and covered with water.

A few hours later I had a delicious crock pot meal.  This time I used regular ham hocks instead of the smoked kind and the flavor of the broth was much better.  I added some black pepper but there was no need for any salt.  Ham hocks and blackeye peas are good food.

Good food is one of the pleasures of life.

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is always open to short story submissions.  Writers (bloggers) should read and follow the submission guidelines.

Obama Weighs Taxing Health Benefits

This excerpt is from an article by Jackie Calmes and Robert Pear published in the 03/15/09 Pittsburgh Post Gazette.

The Obama administration is signaling to Congress that the president could support taxing some employee health benefits, as several influential lawmakers and many economists favor, to help pay for an overhaul of the health care system.

The proposal is politically problematic for President Barrack Obama, however, since it is similar to one he denounced in the presidential campaign as “the largest middle-class tax increase in history.”  Most Americans with insurance get it from their employers, and taxing workers for the benefit is strongly opposed by union leaders and some businesses…

More On Good Ideas For Short Stories

Maybe the question should not be where does a writer or a blogger get good ideas for a short story but maybe the question should be how does the writer shape an idea into a short story.

Ideas are everywhere.  What a writer has to remember is: There must be a protagonist that wants something.  Someone or something stands in the way of the protagonist getting what he or she wants.  This creates conflict and this conflict must be resolved at the very end of the story by a realization, or a summation of the situation or a change in direction.

So, when you’re blogging or writing just grab any idea that comes to mind.  The real creative work begins in trying to make the idea fit into short story form.

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is open to submissions.  Creative writers should read and follow the submission guidelines.

Submissions, Short Stories & A Novel

There are over 65 short stories and one novel in the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette for your Sunday reading pleasure.  If you are a writer of very short stories, flash fiction stories or short stories between 200-2,000 words, there are over 180 articles on how to write this demanding art form.

Aspiring writers can click on the Free Help For Writers tab at the top of the page to get a free critique of their stories.

And if you have a story ready for submission, just read and follow the submission guidelines.

Welcome to the Gazette.

Guy Hogan
Editor/Publisher

A Flash Fiction Story by Terry A. Elkins

Twenty-Three Steps To Goodbye

 

Martha Brentwood stood stoic against the first arctic gale of the season, as she waited for the number-seven to carry her to Saint Ann’s Cathedral for the sixth time in two years.  A trip she never got used to.  The harsh breath of winter bit at her as rabid flecks of crystalline powdered snow threatened to bury her where she stood.  Her mourning-black Cashmere coat was faded by time, and it did nothing to cover her bare hands, but she didn’t shiver, she didn’t blink, and she didn’t move.  Her heart was warmed by the precious memories of Anna, as she recalled their first encounter at the fourth street USO where they both worked so many years ago…Lost in her memories she hadn’t heard the number-seven slide to a halt in front of her—she was somewhere in time. 

A barrel chested man bounced off the bus with the grace of a younger man.  His chiseled features, leather skin, and gray hair—all marked by time, gave him the look of distinguished charm, contrasted only by his simple black slacks, and weathered pea coat.  Blinded by the snow he stumbled to a halt mere inches from the statuesque beauty before him.  Her soft-powdered-pale skin was nearly lost in the backdrop of winter’s fury.  But her sea-green eyes and luscious ruby lips cast a luminescent glow like a watch keepers lantern meant to guide lost sailors home.  He knew this beauty,  and rusted memories of a love long past broke free from their moors as he recalled a four day furlough, a sailors first kiss, an enchanted honey moon, and a sobered divorce sent first class mail from Normandy.

“Martha—Martha, are you ok dear?”  Martha was pulled back into the ferocity of the storm as her memories faded back into the shadows of yesteryear. 

“Excuse me, do I know you?”  Martha asked. 

“It’s me, your ex-husband, John Brentwood.”  As frozen tears of remembrance welled in her eyes, John asked, “Where are you going, Martha?” 

“I’m going to say good bye to an old friend at Saint Ann’s.” 

“Me too,” John said, “but why are you standing here?” 

“I’m waiting for the number-seven to take me there,” Martha said with a tremble in her voice. 

“Martha, honey, you’re standing in front of Saint Ann’s.”

Startled by this revelation, Maratha’s knees buckled and John reached out to her.  As they clasped hands, the cold-cheap -gold bands they had given one another over half a century ago were reunited.  But this reunion was cut short by the somber chimes of funeral bells.

They turned, facing the marble steps of Saint Ann’s, solemnly remembering why they were there.  It was Anna who had introduced them all those years ago, it was Anna who had brought them together on this day, and it was Anna they were going to see.  Arm in arm, walking silently, they faded into the storm as they climbed the last twenty-three steps to good-bye.   

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Terry Elkins is a factory worker who lives in Northwest Indiana.  A former Marine, husband, and father to six children, he loves to to read, learn, and write.  He is an aspiring writer who recently started his own blog to share his passion for writing with the world.  He hopes to one day publish his work.  www.whyguys.wordpress.com 

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is open to submissions.  Writers should read the submission guidelines before submitting.

A Flash Fiction Story by Jason Sobelman

Privilege Of Distance

When did conversations stop at the front door? 

 

Mother’s darting eyes, searching for some semblance of recognition  in her child. She starts in, “Your father is going to call the cops if he finds you here!”. 

 

“Mom.”

 

A conversation takes place, that is dreamlike and soon forgotten.  Between a junkie and his mother. She guilts me into the understanding, of the jeopardy that I put her in. I comment, she should  leave him and we could  work out our problems together. A pattern has worn her voice, like the deep creases of the laugh lines in her face. She fumbles for a smoke in a jacket pocket. Silently, handing me a business card with an 800 number for kicking my habit before handing me a smoke.

 

A snicker shoots up, faster then the  smoke exhaled from her lips. Then in a nervous blurt she says, “Remember when you stole the neighbor’s garden hose, and tried to return it back at the hardware store !”

 

I laugh, recalling the neighbor’s  expression. The  sheer disbelief of spotting his hose strewn on some vacant sidewalk  miles from his home.

 

Behind me, I hear the neighbor’s Volkswagen pull into his driveway. I don’t want to look. “I could be rich if that scam would have panned out.” Even though I know the scam was a farce.

 

Her cigarette’s ash drops to the ground.  “Honey, I think you better go.”

 

Mother turns her back, and starts toward the front door.  I’m dying here. I’m not thinking right as I scan for something to steal to score.

 

I peer across at the neighbor. Contemplating, to bust him in the jaw and rip that cell phone from his hands. As he stands there, in a threatening pose with his cell phone open, acting like the dictator of Neighborhood Watch. It’s the images you don’t communicate,  that you wrestle with the longest.

 

Startled, I feel my mother’s hand push money into mine. It’s hard for me to thank her, with sincerity. As impatience takes over my body.

 

 I stride down the street and hear, Chrissy Hynde singing the lullaby “Show Me The Meaning Of The World”.  It carries me through the night.

 

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Bio: Born and living in Northern California.  Survived by a wife and 1 daughter. Published in various poetry contests and the Benicia Historical Chapbook. Published a chapbook in 2008, Dream On The Bible.

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is open to submissions.  Writers should read and follow the guidelines.

Is Publication In A Small Journal Worth It

Most of us would like to be published in a high profile magazine that’s read by thousands of readers.  I know I would.  The chances of that happening are slim.  Blogging to a small number of readers is as large of an audience as most of us will ever have.

But writing and blogging are about more than the number of readers the writer and the blogger gets.  Most writers and bloggers do what they do because to write and to blog is to have faith in the power of words.

We word people send out our short stories, flash fiction stories, very short stories and novels in the hope that some editor or some reader somewhere will say, “Job well done.”

This is why publication in a small journal is worth it.  This is why publication in the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is worth it.

And, if somewhere further along the line you do make some money then you will be truly blessed.  But first before the money must come the commitment to a job well done.

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