Four Love Stories To Read

Yes, I’m a man, a blogger and I write love stories.  I like writing love stories.  I want to see how they turn out.  Male-female relationships are so complex that it’s a relief to deal with them in a short short, a very short story or in flash fiction.  It’s not like real life.

The point every writer knows is that the characters and the reader don’t know how the story is going to turn out, either.

Here are four love stories, that take place in Pittsburgh,  for your reading pleasure.  Just click on the following links.

Woman, Wife and Lover (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/Woman-Wife-and-Lover-fiction.622331

True Love (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/True-Love.638929 

Love Hurts (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/Love-Hurts.676237 

This Man and This Woman in Love (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/This-Man-and-This-Woman-in-Love.634089

Flash Fiction by Vivien Jones

The Label

It was the most beautiful t-shirt. White, light and sleek. Perfect cut. Ashley twirled in front of the mirror, loving herself from every angle. It was so cool. She grinned at the assistant. 

‘Go on then, where is it ?’ 

The girl tried to look interested but it was 4.00 pm on a Saturday. 

‘Where is what?’ she asked. 

‘The label.’ Ashley spoke in her isn’t-it-obvious voice. 

The assistant shrugged. She came close to Ashley and ran her fingers along the hems and seams of the t-shirt. 

‘There isn’t one.’ She concluded.  

It was Ashley’s turn to be puzzled. This was a designer outlet, not just a shop. Of course there was a label. Unless……..

 

‘Not having a label – wow!’ 

This could be the start of something. She could be a trend-setter, first with the newest thing.  The ultimate in cool. Wasn’t there some cigarette adverts ages ago that never said the name of the cigarette ?  She looked in the mirror again. It looked just as good but something was bugging her. 

Just how would her friends know without a label?  What if they thought it was only High Street?  Ashley blanched in fear.  

No sale.

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Biography : Vivien Jones lives on the north Solway shore in Scotland where she writes poetry, short fiction and drama pieces for performance, often in collaboration with the early music group she plays with  www.thegallowayconsort.co.uk  She has been widely published in each of these genres in the UK and is a regular reader at literary events. 

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is open to short short, sudden fiction, post-card fiction and very short stories of 100 to 1,000 words.  Please follow the submission guidelines.

Short Short Stories Are Like Being Naked

It’s a hot, sunny day in Pittsburgh.  A cold beer goes down real nice…

The Penguins are going to the next round of the NHL playoffs and the Pirates are still playing above 500 baseball while the Steelers drafted a defensive tackle named Ziggy Hood from Missouri…

The Pittsburgh Police Bureau will purchase 46 Smith & Wesson M&P15 rifles, the civilian version of the M-16 which I used in Vietnam…

Okay, my brother and sister bloggers and writers, how is flash fiction, short shorts, micro-fiction, sudden fiction and the very short story like being naked?

The article Flash Fiction and Nudity www.writinghood.com/style/flash-fiction-and-nudity/ tells you all about it.

Writing Short On Long Subjects

“Writing short on long subjects” is one of the best definitions I’ve come across about what the writer of the short short, flash fiction and very short story does.  I don’t know where I came across the saying but it stuck with me.

These short narratives that the very short story writer writes are not meant to capture the big picture.  The big picture is for the novel.  Sudden fiction captures the very small picture.  The best of these small pictures “imply” a larger picture.

And “picture” is not a word that is used in this article by accident.  Picture implies something that is to be looked at as in “show don’t tell.”

To “show don’t tell” the creative writer must use words to paint a picture that tells a story.

The Modern American Woman (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/The-Modern-American-Woman.632185

10 New Short Short Stories To Read

If you read or write short stories, flash fiction, micro-fiction, sudden fiction, short shorts or very short stories you will love these stories about love, relationships, writing, karaoke, sexuality, war, alcoholism, money and the mysteries of life.  The stories are:

True Love

Young Love

This Man and This Woman in Love

The Modern American Woman

The Death of Karaoke

Woman, Wife and Lover

Sex, Booze and a Short Memory

Vietnam in the Mist

Money and the American Writer

Love Hurts

You will find all these stories in the sidebar on the right under More Short Short Stories.

Enjoy

This Is How You Can Write Every Day

It’s around 9:00 a.m. in Pittsburgh and it’s a sunny day.  It’s suppose to be around 80 degrees today.  A great day for being outside.  Or a great day for blogging.  Or a great day for writing…

Wouldn’t it be great if Obama could squeeze something out of the credit card companies the way the credit card companies have squeezed money out of the American consumer?  At the very least let’s hope credit card terms will be written in plain language and the print won’t be so small…

If you are a writer the best thing you can do is write every day.  If life doesn’t give you much time to write, flash fiction, short shorts and very short stories might be perfect for you.  Once you come up with the basic idea, the first draft of 200 to 400 words can be written in minutes.  It’s coming up with the idea for a story that’s difficult.  So, keep a pad around or however you keep track of your ideas and “at least write down some ideas every day.”  This is how you write every day.

The following two stories are the results of this theory in action.  Just click on the links.

Money and the American Writer (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/Money-and-the-American-Writer.661683 

Woman, Wife and Lover (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/Woman-Wife-and-Lover-fiction.622331

Love Hurts (A New Short Story)

Yes, the Old Soldier has a new short short story for all you flash fiction readers out there to read today.  But first I’d like to do a little blogging…

It’s a beautiful, sunny 78 degrees in Pittsburgh.  Even though I can still see the Cathedral of Learning of the University of Pittsburgh from one of my apartment windows it won’t be long before new leaves on the trees block my view…

Last night I watched the movie The Last Tycoon on tape starring a young Robert DeNiro.  The film is based on the unfinished novel of F. Scott Fitzgerald’s (one of my favorite writers) by the same name.  I read the book years ago and parts of it started coming back as I watched the movie.

The movie was directed by Elia Kazan.  If you are a writer and you are serious about writing you can learn a great deal about “show don’t tell” by watching a good movie.  The camera paints a picture that tells a story.  Words can paint a picture that tells a story, too.  It is my contention that an image, a picture, is action, is emotion, is thought.  Remember, dialogue is action, too.

Now for your reading pleasure, here is a story about sex, the desire for family, life, men, women and love in an American city. 

Love Hurts (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Thoughts/Love-Hurts.668183

Give Your Characters Life

Hello, it’s the Old Soldier here again.  Today we are blogging in Pittsburgh on a sunny, 60 degree day.  The rest of the week will be sunny in the high 70s to low 80s.  Yes indeed that’s my kind of weather in my kind of town…

Can you believe the Pirates are playing 600 baseball ( how long will that last?) and the Penguins are up 3-1 in the NHL playoffs…

West Penn Allegheny Health System has filed a suit in federal court against the University of Pittsburgh Medical Center for being a local monopoly…

Dialogue.  Dialogue.  Dialogue.  Dialogue is one of the most powerful tools that a writer has.  If you want to write short shorts or very short stories that come alive then your characters must come alive and the best way to do that is through dialogue.  Dialogue allows the reader to “hear” your characters speak in their own words expressing their own thoughts.

If you’re having trouble writing dialogue remember this one thing.  Give each speaking character a different agenda.  Don’t explain to the reader what the agenda is.  Just let your characters talk and the reader will know what each character’s agenda is and your flash fiction will sing.

The following two short stories are good examples of this theory of dialogue.  Just click on the following links:

Money and the American Writer (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/Money-and-the-American-Writer.661683

Vietnam in the Mist (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/Vietnam-in-the-Mist.643749

Love, Life And Short Stories

True Love (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/True-Love.638929 

It’s a little late in the day (5:00 p.m.) to be blogging but it’s not as if I’m on a tight schedule.  I just wanted to put some thoughts into words today.

It’s a little chilly in Pittsburgh today with the sun peeking out occasionally from behind the clouds.  I’m stretched out on the sofa listening to classical music on the radio; but soon I’ll turn off the radio and put on the television for the evening news on Public TV.

For those of you new to the Gazette you will find plenty of flash fiction stories to read and ideas, tips, insights and advice in dozens of articles on the craft of writing the very short story.

Guest writers retain all rights.

This Man and This Woman in Love (A Short Story) www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/This-Man-and-This-Woman-in-Love.634089

Money And The American Writer (A Short Story)

Yes, I do have a new short story for your reading pleasure; but before we get to it I thought I’d do a little blogging first…

My niece Brianna Frost, who is a webcam stripper, is now a reality television star on an MTV show called The Girls Of Hedsor Hall.  I wonder how far her career will go.  Her career started with her making videos of herself dancing around naked in her apartment and then posting the videos on the Internet.  I’m not making this up.  Does anyone even watch MTV anymore?  And you wonder where I get my ideas from for my flash fiction…

After I post this on the Gazette I’m going for a walk to Bloomfield, Pittsburgh’s “Little Italy” (the sun is trying to come out) to pick up a few items from the supermarket and maybe to have a couple of beers at Del’s Italian Restaurant.  Many businesses in Bloomfield still have black bunting up outside to honor the three Pittsburgh police officers killed by Richard Poplawski…

All right, now for the story “Money and the American Writer.”  I was a TA (Teaching Assistant) at the University of Pittsburgh from 2004-2006 while I worked on my MFA in fiction writing.  Chuck Kinder, the head of the writing program, had awarded me a K. LeRoy Irvis fellowship which paid for my entire graduate school education for three years and gave me a nice stipend to live off of.  He liked my flash fiction.  Part of the contract I signed to get the fellowship was to teach a class for two years while I worked on the MFA. 

I had my own little cubicle–no door–where I had to put in so many scheduled office hours a week in case one of my students needed attention; they would know where to find me.  Never in a million years, especially at the age of 58, did I ever envision myself teaching undergraduates.

The following story is based on that teaching experience at the University of Pittsburgh.  Just click on the following link:  www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/Money-and-the-American-Writer.661683

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