Let The Reader Discover Your Story

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Let the reader discover your story.  What exactly does that mean?

Hello hello hello, bloggers, creative writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics.  Whenever a writer writes flash fiction, the best thing that can happen is for the reader to be a part of the creative process.  The only way for this to happen is for the writer to offer just enough of the story and no more so that the reader can fill in the rest.

When a reader can use his or her imagination to complete the story the story becomes a journey of discovery for the reader.

So, let the reader discover your story.

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Free Help For Aspiring Writers

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If you are an aspiring creative writer, try sending something to the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette, the most dynamic flash fiction blog on the Internet.  You will either be published in a few days or receive a supportive, short critique that will help you get published next time.

I want to publish you as much as you want to be published.  Every story that is accepted is entered into the writing contest.  You can’t beat that with a stick.

So, send me something.  This is a magazine published by a creative writer for creative writers.  Be sure to read and follow the submission guidelines.

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New Flash Fiction by Peter Baltensperger

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It’s time to showcase the work of a guest writer.  This is the second piece by this writer to be published in the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette.  Hello hello hello, my brother and sister bloggers, writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics.

The month of August is coming to an end.  But it’s been a good month of blogging for the Old Soldier.  I published new writers, signed up new subscribers and increased the readership of The Gazette, the most dynamic flash fiction blog on the Internet.

Remember, the writing contest ends on October 1, 2010.  Get your story end as soon as possible.

Now for our feature presentation.

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Heat Wave

It was one of those stifling hot summer evenings when not even the air conditioner brought much relief, nor the fan in the bedroom window. Alicia was sprawled out on the king-size four-poster bed, watching the large-screen TV up on the wall. She had her legs spread out and her negligee pulled up to the top of her thighs to catch at least some of the circulating air from the fan, her pale breasts nestled into the lacy silk of her top. She moaned every time the fan wafted some air over her body, periodically adjusting her body on the bed. 

Jeremy was lying naked beside her, coping with the heat in his own way, only one eye on the TV, the other on the luscious body sprawled out beside him. After a while, the temptation of his half-naked wife became too much for him, despite the heat. He turned over on his side and reached for her breast. Alicia sighed deliciously as soon as he touched her, as she always did. She loved having her breasts in his hands. Jeremy quickly slid his hand underneath the silky material and let it come to rest against the luscious globe. Alicia moaned as her proud nipple hardened against the palm of his hand. 

“Aren’t you too hot for this?” she sighed. 

“I’m never too hot for this,” Jeremy parried. 

“Of course you’re not,” Alicia smiled. “You never are.” 

With that, she lifted her body slightly towards him, pressing her breast again his hand and moaning deeply with satisfaction and desire. 

“You make me feel so good,” she whispered against his cheek. 

Jeremy let go of her hot breast and slid his hand down over the sensuous gown and down over her bare thigh, then slowly up the soft inside of her thigh, a trembling snake slithering towards a delectable morsel, closer and closer each time without ever quite touching the treasure. 

“Stop teasing!” Alicia moaned. “I can’t stand this anymore.” 

“You like it when I do this,” Jeremy reminded her. “Do you want me to stop?” 

“No, no,” Alicia protested. “Don’t stop. Of course I like it when you do that. But I do want to feel your hand on me.” 

Jeremy let his hand glide up and down her thigh a few more times, teasingly, promisingly, coming dangerously close to his ultimate destination, until Alicia bucked against his hand and he grabbed her dripping vagina, like a thirst-stricken traveler grabbing a long-desired bottle of nectar. 

Alicia groaned deep down inside her being and pushed her aching pelvis against his desperately awaited hand. He took hold of her with determination, rubbing her diligently, expertly, until she pressed herself against him and started to tremble with the onset of her orgasm. Jeremy intensified his ministrations, moved his index finger to her clit, and teased it and fondled and massaged it until he could feel the rush of fulfillment take hold of her body and she screamed through a delicious, all-encompassing orgasm. 

Jeremy gave her a few minutes to ride out the aftershocks and catch her breath, then climbed on top of her and easily slid into her well-lubricated opening. He could feel her interior muscles tighten around him as she sighed with deep pleasure and sucked him further and further into herself. Within a few minutes, she heaved her pelvis against his, and he squirted into her at the same time as her orgasmic contractions sucked at him and drained him of his treasure. 

They cried out together as they grabbed at each other and flung their arms around one another, two people drowning in the throes of absolute pleasure, and rocked against each other in the fantastic delirium of their simultaneous release. He stayed on top of her for a while, both gasping for breath, feeling their hearts beat against the other, moaning and groaning unabashedly in the afterglow of their union. Then he rolled off her and they sprawled out on the bed beside each other, their fingers entwined, their rapidly beating hearts echoing their individual rhythms. 

The heat didn’t matter anymore at all. 

The End

Bio: Peter Baltensperger is a Canadian writer of Swiss origin and the author of ten books of various genres. His work has appeared in several hundred publications around the world. His erotic stories, poems, and essays have been widely published in print as well as on-line, including The Mammoth Book of Best New Erotica, Sex in the City, Paris, Clean Sheets, The Erotic Woman, Oysters and Chocolate, and Black Heart Magazine.

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Why Do Young Women Do Porn?

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Today, I’m re-running an article from the archives of the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette that I wrote in July about the growing attraction on American women of doing porn.

Hello hello hello, bloggers, writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics.  It’s no secret that the largest number of sites on the Internet are porn sites.  My own niece is a webcam stripper. She owns her own site.  She makes very good money.  Her name is Brianna Frost.  I’ve watched her videos become more and more explicit until recently she did fellatio on camera.

I think that more and more women, especially young women, will go into porn.  They will willingly have their bodies ravaged for money, notoriety, and yes, for uninhibited sex.  Many of them will be college girls in need of money and getting what they feel is a life experience.  Most of them will do only a few adult videos and then move on with their lives.

But the more I study why our wives, girlfriends, daughters and nieces do sex videos, I think it’s less about the money and more about the liberating intoxication of guiltless sex with no attachments.  For many women, having an orgasm or two or three on camera is “hot.”

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Pornography was around long before the Internet.  It was around before the invention of writing.  It can be found in numerous scenes painted on the walls of caves by our ancestors.  The internet has sent the production and consumption of porn into overdrive.  An ever-increasing number of willing young women are showing up in porn videos.  Why?

I have read reports that the porn industry makes more billions of dollars than the movie industry and the music industry combined.  I have no doubt that the day will come when the porn-industry lobby will be one of the most powerful lobbies in Washington D.C. 

The Old Soldier is no prude.  My own niece has been a webcam stripper since she was 19.  She’s in her early 20s now and makes more money each year than I ever made each year I was working before I retired.  She doesn’t do hard-core pornography…yet.

It is my belief that the stream of young women into porn is only going to increase.  Already, young women text pictures of themselves nude.  They make home videos of themselves having sex.  The logical next step is to get paid to do what they are already doing.  And if that means having sex with one or more strange men, so be it.

Being in a porn video does not carry the sort of stigma it use to for many young women between the ages of 18 and 25, many who are in college.  They use false names, withhold the names of their universities and then proceed to allow their bodies to be ravaged.  For so many of them, it’s naughty and very exciting stuff, all those aroused men and all those video cameras pointed at them, all those flash cameras going off in the background.  Often, the women have their own orgasms.  It’s easy money.

Like any industry, some porn sites are run better than others.  The smart porn sites make the shoots fun for the women. 

There is one site that interviews the women before the shoot.  The interview is done in an office, the women in their street clothes.  The guy doing the interview has a talent for making these young women relax, to feel more comfortable about what is about to happen.  The interview makes the women seem very human.  They are definitely not porn stars.  They are strictly amateurs.  This site only wants amateurs.  Many of the amateurs are articulate. 

After the shoot the women are again in their street clothes in the office being interviewed again.  They are asked what they thought of the shoot, what they did and did not like.  You would be surprised at what many of them liked.  A large percentage offer to come back and shoot another video.  They agree to do things in the next video that they did not do in the first video.  Some have such a good time in the first video that they end up recommending their friends to the site.  You can’t buy that sort of publicity.  In this way, the site has a never-ending stream of willing young women to have in its sex videos. 

This can be easy money for the young women who do porn as a youthful experiment and then get out.  The trick seems to be not to end up on poorly run sites and not to become addicted to the easy money.

I can see the day coming when it won’t be unusual for a happily married woman in her 40s to be having a morning cup of coffee with her best female friend and to confide in her friend that she was pretty wild in her teens and 20s, that she did five porn videos from the time she was 18 to the time she was 26; only to have the best friend ask, “Did you ever see any of ’Mary’s Hot Gangbangs’?”

“You mean…”

“Yep, that was little old me.  I had the first orgasms in my life on those shoots.  The site kept bringing me back because they knew I wasn’t faking.  The guys subscribing to the site knew I wasn’t faking.  I ended doing seven gangbangs in all.”

“Does Steve know?”

“He would die.  Bob?”

“What they don’t know won’t hurt them.”

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I Want To Publish You

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Let the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette be your literary home.

Hello hell hello, my blogging and writing friends and my Flash Fiction Fanatics.  If you write and you want the recognition of publication, you will find no other publication so willing to go the extra mile to publish you as the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette will.

Hi, I’m the Old Soldier and I know what it’s like to be a writer trying to get published.  Send me something.  Read and follow the submission guidelines.  You have nothing to lose and a publishing credit to gain.  Read a few of the stories that have already been published here just to get a feel for the kind of thing The Gazette offers to its readers.

Good luck.

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Sex Makes For Great Flash Fiction

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Yes, the Old Soldier is proud of his erotica.

Hello hello hello, my brother and sister bloggers, writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics.  The Old Soldier is getting ready for karaoke tonight at Del’s Italian Restaurant in Bloomfield, Pittsburgh’s “Little Italy.”  So, this will be my last post of the day.

I’ve already decided what my first two songs will be: Love Me Two Times by The Doors and Sister Christian by Night Ranger.  I may only get to sing two songs.

Anyway, the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is famous for its literary erotica.  Women enjoy these sex stories, too.  Why?  Because I don’t use “dirty” language and the relationships are just as important as the sex.

Click on the Sexy Stories tab at the top of the page and enjoy.  Now I have to do my breathing exercises.

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What Makes A Protagonist Interesting?

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No one likes a know it all.

Hello hello hello, my brother and sister bloggers, writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics.  Welcome to another edition of the  Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette.  Jake Barnes in The Sun Also Rises by Ernest Hemingway is my favorite protagonist.  Why?

Because the man has issues.  He is very conflicted.  Because of a war wound, he cannot have sex with the woman he loves.  Ouch!

Throughout the novel, Jake struggles to live life as best he can with his war wound.  His struggle makes for some heartbreaking and riveting reading.

The point is, when you build a protagonist make sure he or she has some internal conflict.  Everyone else in your story can be convinced of their position, but your protagonist has to have doubt.

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Writing Flash Fiction About Your Life

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The Old Soldier is a great believer in writing about what you know.

Hello hello hello, all my brother and sister bloggers, writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics.  When I was a graduate student at the University of Pittsburgh from 2003-2006, I was also a teaching assistant at Pitt from 2004-2006.  Teaching was how I paid for my MFA.  I was a K. LeRoy Irvis Fellow.  Flash fiction got me my $60,000 fellowship.

Many of my undergraduate students wrote stories about characters that had great adventures in exotic places, adventures that the student writer had not experienced and exotic lands the student writer had never been to.

These stories had all sorts of holes in them.  Unless a writer does tons of research, a writer can’t write about what he or she has not experienced with any sort of authority.  And the reader will know it.

If you are not going to do tons of research (I know I’m not going to do it) you better write about “what you know.”  And what do we all know about?  We know about our own lives.  Your own life will make for great flash fiction stories.

Write about what you know.

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Led Zeppelin And Flash Fiction

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Now you may wonder what Led Zeppelin has to do with flash fiction.

Hello hello hello, my brother and sister bloggers, writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics.  Probably none of you know that the Old Soldier has a rock and roll history.

I was the frontman for several local “basement” bands in my youth.  What is a “basement” band?  That’s a band that practices and practices and never plays out.  Even now I have my old PA system set up in my livingroom: mike, mike stand, four channel power mixer and two large speakers.  Now I just sing karaoke.

But since I got my new high-speed Internet connection, I’ve been checking out videos of my favorite bands.  Bands I never got to see when I was young.

I always thought The Doors were the shit.  I can do a dead on Morrison vocal impersonation.  But recently I watched several videos of Led Zeppelin when the lads were in their prime.  The videos were of Zeppelin live. 

They were monsters.  It shook me.  After all these years, I now realize that Led Zeppelin was the greatest rock and roll band ever.

What does any of this have to do with writing flash fiction?  Absolutely nothing.

But why don’t you take out an email subscription to the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette, the most dynamic flash fiction publication on the Internet, and you will find out all about the entertainment and the art that is flash fiction.

Flash fiction contains a whole lotta of love.

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Keep Writing

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Don’t give up on your dream of publication.  Hello hello hello, my brother and sister bloggers, writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics.  The Old Soldier wants to publish you as much as you want to be published.  The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is ranked #3 by Google under the search term “flash fiction.”  If The Gazette publishes your short story people will see it.

So, read a few of the stories that have already been published by this magazine to get a feel for the kind of fiction The Gazette offers to its readership and then read and follow the submission guidelines and send me something.

I’ll get back to you in a few days.

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