Final cover of Please, Sir: Erotic Stories of Female Submission (Photo credit: rachelkramerbussel.com)
The Old Soldier recently received an erotic submission in which a woman tries to make a man cum by fellatio. She had to accomplish this sex act within two minutes. She failed to meet the deadline.
That was the submission.
When I emailed the writer and asked her why there was a deadline, she emailed me back that it was just to heighten the experience for the man and the woman.
My friends, a sex act is simply a sex act. It is not a short story. What is a short story?
A short story is a “significant” event with closure.
A woman trying to make a man cum by fellatio within two minutes is not a significant event. I explained all of this to the writer and encouraged her to try again.
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sex actions need not be desplasyed any how. It’s a home affair. Thanks for that tip indeed, nice weekend.
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