Literature: Why So Much Sex?

Compare the population pyramid of the USA whic...

Image via Wikipedia

One argument goes, sex is only a part of life.  I say sex is life.

Hello, baby boomers, college students, creative writers and my Flash Fiction Fanatics.  If you’ve been paying attention, the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette has made sexology an important part of its online persona.

Why did the Old Soldier make this decision?

It was an easy enough decision to come to.  From a very empirical point of view, sex is life.  You don’t agree?

Look at it this way.  If there was no sex there would be no people, no animals, no plants, no insects, no living thing on this planet.  That’s how important sex is.

And that’s why sex is an important part of the writing on this blog.  Of course, the argument about how important sex is will continue.

And now a story from the archives that brings the argument over the importance of sex down to the personal level as only flash fiction can do.

********************

The Truth About Sex

She and I were sitting at a table at the big window in the Sanctuary drinking mugs of cold beer. Before the Sanctuary went out of business, it was only a few blocks from the Cathedral of Learning of the University of Pittsburgh. My friend was in her forties and was working on her doctorate. I was in my fifties working on my baccalaureate.

“Sex sex sex,” my friend was saying. “That’s all you men ever think about.”

“It’s not all we think about. But it is what gets men and women together in the first place.”

 
“No it’s not,” she said. “You claim to know so much about women. And I’ll tell you something else, too. No matter how good the sex is it won’t keep a couple together.”

“Have you ever known a married couple with a lousy sex life?”

“Have you ever known one with no life outside of sex?” she said.

I think we were both a little drunk. “Lay Down” by Melanie played on the jukebox. A nice mix of Pitt students from different countries was in the place. I looked through the big window at the buildings, cars parked along the street and at the people passing by. Inside, the Sanctuary was pleasantly dim and cool. Outside, it was a hot, bright, lovely September afternoon. I didn’t mind being in my fifties. I didn’t mind being an undergraduate at Pitt.

“So,” I said, “what’s the solution?”

“Guy, darling, what makes you think there is one.”

Led Zeppelin And Flash Fiction

Robert Plant (left) and Jimmy Page (right) of ...

Image via Wikipedia

Now you may wonder what Led Zeppelin has to do with flash fiction.

Hello hello hello, my brother and sister bloggers, writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics.  Probably none of you know that the Old Soldier has a rock and roll history.

I was the frontman for several local “basement” bands in my youth.  What is a “basement” band?  That’s a band that practices and practices and never plays out.  Even now I have my old PA system set up in my livingroom: mike, mike stand, four channel power mixer and two large speakers.  Now I just sing karaoke.

But since I got my new high-speed Internet connection, I’ve been checking out videos of my favorite bands.  Bands I never got to see when I was young.

I always thought The Doors were the shit.  I can do a dead on Morrison vocal impersonation.  But recently I watched several videos of Led Zeppelin when the lads were in their prime.  The videos were of Zeppelin live. 

They were monsters.  It shook me.  After all these years, I now realize that Led Zeppelin was the greatest rock and roll band ever.

What does any of this have to do with writing flash fiction?  Absolutely nothing.

But why don’t you take out an email subscription to the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette, the most dynamic flash fiction publication on the Internet, and you will find out all about the entertainment and the art that is flash fiction.

Flash fiction contains a whole lotta of love.

Click on the Ebook tab at the top of the page if you are really serious about taking your writing to the next level.

Subscribe To The Gazette Today

Don’t miss a single issue.  Don’t miss the flash fiction.  Don’t miss the articles on writing.  Don’t miss the articles on blogging.  Don’t miss the news commentaries.  Don’t miss the excitement.

Hello, my brother and sister bloggers and writers.  This is the Old Soldier reporting from the heart of the nitty, gritty city.  If you are a blogger or a writer or a reader who cares about good writing this blog is for you.

The Gazette is dedicated to bringing you some of the best flash fiction being published on the internet today.  And The Gazette is free.  So don’t take a chance on missing a single issue.  Have The Gazette delivered to your inbox every day.

The subscription tab is at the top of the page.  Subscribe today!

BP Oil Disaster Has No End In Sight

The BP oil disaster continues.  BP cannot stop the oil spill.  The story of the oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico is the story of one failure after another.  There was the explosion that killed several crew members working on the rig.  The bodies of several of the crew members will never be found.  Then BP played down the amount of oil that was spilling into the gulf.  Then there was the 100 ton containment box that was lowered down 5,000 feet to set over the well head.  The box was to capture the oil and deposit it in a tanker waiting on the ocean surface.  That failed.  Now BP is lowering another, much lighter box down to do the same thing.

In the mean time at least two relief wells are being drilled to lessen pressure on the main well.  But the relief wells will not be ready for at least two more months.

And all this time 200,000 gallons of crude a day spill into the waters off Louisiana.  The oil slick slowly moves to shore destroying the livelihoods of a 250,000 or more people from Texas to Florida.

Scientist are warning that if the oil gets into the Gulf Stream it will travel up the East Coast of the United States causing more chaos.

Still, there is no end in sight.

News: Oil Spill Will Go On Three More Months

BP CEO Tony Hayward has told members of the House and the Senate that he does not expect BP to be able to stop the spilling of  tens of thousands of gallons of oil every day into the Gulf of Mexico for at least three more months.  Many on Capitol Hill were stunned at this forecast.  It means the drama unfolding off the coast of Louisiana will be the greatest environmental disaster in the history of the United Sates.

BP is presently towing huge concrete contraptions out into the Gulf of Mexico in the hope the contraptions can be lowered down into the ocean 5,000 feet to where the well head is in an effort to cap off the oil flow and to channel it up into holding containers floating on the surface of the ocean.  This method of trapping oil at this depth has never been done before.

Hayward had no idea if the effort would work.  BP is also drilling another well to relieve the pressure on the oil leak.  This relief well will take three months to complete.

In the meantime the livelihoods of over 250,000 people who depend on harvesting the seafood in the Gulf of Mexico is slowly being destroyed.

How Do You Create Your Characters?

It’s an overcast, warm day this Sunday in Pittsburgh.  The Pittsburgh Marathon is today.  No, I won’t be running in the marathon but I may go out and cheer the other runners on.  Well, it’s been quite a week with the oil spill and the new immigration law in Arizona.  Oh, I forgot Goldman Sachs.  The head of Goldman Sachs was on Charlie Rose a couple of nights ago.  I didn’t even want to hear what the man had to say.  He keeps his millions while millions of Americans have their 401Ks and pensions wiped out because of what his company and other companies on Wall Street did in swindling investors out of their money.  It was their own investors.  There’s no way of getting around it no matter what sort of spin the Wall Street firms put on their business dealings…

********************

But we bloggers and writers of flash fiction have other things on our mind.  

I don’t know how other writers create their characters but I get mine from real life.  I’ve used my mother, father, brothers and sisters; brothers-in-law and sisters-in-law in my fiction.  I’ve used my niece.  I’ ve used old girlfriends and army buddies.  I’ve used strangers I’ve met, classmates and people in crowds that I’ve seen in the city.  And most of all I’ve used myself.

Now this doesn’t mean I don’t make things up.  I write fiction.  What it does mean is that I don’t make everything up.

It’s easier that way.

How do you create your characters?

Short Story Ideas That Work

The Naked Blogger

Good morning, my brother and sister bloggers and writers.  The Gazette has been around for about a year and a half and it has all kinds of links in the sidebar on the right.  But The Gazette is constantly adding new material to this flash fiction blog.  The blog deals with flash fiction, writing flash fiction and blogging.

The Old Soldier knows a little bit about blogging.  So, along with all the great flash fiction stories you will find here and the great articles on writing, here are four new links about blogging.  Don’t forget to tell all your friends about The Gazette.  They’ll appreciate it.

The Naked Blogger

My First Big Break

Blogging: One Hit Wonders

Blogging: Adult Spanking

The iPad Is The Future For Flash Fiction

Hello, bloggers and writers.  What an invention the new Apple iPad is.  The Old Soldier can’t afford one but it sure looks like a winner with a large screen and a purely touch interface.  It’s not a device for creation.  It’s a device for consumption, the consumption of content.  This may be a shot in the arm for newspapers.  The screen of the iPad is large enough to allow newspapers to fit comfortably on the screen.  The Apple iPad is just the beginning of these new large screen, touch interface devices.  Other companies are rushing to put out their own devices.  The device is also perfect for reading books and watching videos.

  Speaking about the consumption of content, download Compressionism: The Pittsburgh Stories and help the Old Soldier get his own iPad…

Good News About Creative Writing

Good morning my brother and sister bloggers and writers.  The Old Soldier is getting an early start at blogging today.  Here’s an article that the Old Soldier wrote before he started referring to himself in the third person.

********************

Flash Fiction Don’t Mean A Thing If  It Ain’t Got That Swing

Think about it. Every story was already told thousands of years ago. The only thing a writer can do now is to individualize and up date his or her story. So it’s not so much what the story is about as it is about how well the story is written. Once again we come back to technique: viewpoint, description, action, characterization and so forth; where to begin the story and where to end it.

Years ago I had a realization. After a certain period of untold rejection notices I accepted the fact that I was getting rejected because I didn’t write well enough. I knew this because not only couldn’t I get published but my stories didn’t compare well to the stories of the writers that I was reading. In other words, it wasn’t my material; it was my technique.

So I set out to teach myself “how” to write. Because I knew that if I could figure out how to write it wouldn’t matter “what” I wrote about.

So don’t worry about your material. Your material doesn’t matter. It’s your technique that will get you published. And of course once your technique is good enough you can create a publishable story from anything.

********************

That’s some good advice.  Short story ideas will come and go.  It’s your technique that stays and has to improve.  And that’s why The Gazette is here.  It’s here for your entertainment and it’s here to help you improve your technique.

The only way to improve your technique is to keep reading and keep writing.

This is the Old Soldier blogging in Pittsburgh about the creative writing life.

The Flash Fiction Bible

Iraq, Afghanistan And Vietnam

Hello, hello, hello my brother and sister bloggers and writers.  This is the Monday edition of the best flash fiction blog on the web.  That’s not according to the Old Soldier.  That’s according to Google.  If you Google “flash fiction” The Gazette will be #4 on the first page.  The publications in the one to three slots are not blogs.  So the Old Soldier wants to thank each of you for visiting this blog and making it #1.

********************

The Old Soldier believes The Gazette is getting closer and closer to its true identity and mission.  A blog usually does not achieve its true identity and mission overnight.  If you look at the top of the page you will see several tabs that make the Old Soldier feel The Gazette is real close: Home, Editorial Services, Open Contest/Submissions, Sexy Stories, Subscribe, YouWrite.

********************

The reason that the Old Soldier is an Old Soldier is because he served with the 1st Cavalry Division (Airmobile) in Vietnam…

The next edition of The Gazette will be published on Wednesday.

********************

Coming Home

The young man moved into the downtown YMCA in his home town of Pittsburgh. The days and nights passed. He lounged about gathering strength from long walks beside the river, from the texture of old buildings and the pigeons in the square and from the wind in the leaves of the trees. At night there was the glow of the fires in the furnaces of the steel mills on the far shore of the river, and the lights of the city and the moving lights of the traffic on the bridges. There were the sweeping search lights of the tug boats on the river pushing barges heaped with coal. There were the well dressed people coming from operas and ballets.

One day he did those things you do in the morning after you get up and he went outside and found it too chilly to be in a short sleeve shirt and not to be wearing a light jacket, but that was okay; it was going to be a hot, sunny day. He looked up at the tall buildings and saw how sunlight glinted off the highest window panes. He watched the young women walk by. Some of their hemlines were mid-thigh. He bought a newspaper and went into a nice, quiet restaurant for breakfast.

It felt strange reading about the war. He didn’t know how much longer it would go on but he did not have to go to it anymore. The artillery rounds of the support batteries exploding up ahead. The harsh whoop! whoop! whoop! whoop! whoop! whoop! whoop! whoop! whoop! sound of dozens of rotary blades beating the air. The tops of trees sweeping past a few feet below. Forcing yourself to get out and stand in the wind on the skids. The explosions of the artillery shells just up ahead suddenly stopping. The entire squad now standing on the skids. The helmets, fatigues, boots, packs, rifles, grenades, pistols, ammo, bayonets, canteens, sweat, body stench, weariness and the fear. Always the fear.

“Sir, would you like anything else? Sir?”

“Just the check, please.”

He looked down at the deep carpeting. He looked at the wood paneling. He watched the well dressed man and woman being shown to a booth.

For a long time he walked around the downtown. Everything seemed new. He ended up in the downtown park. He sat on a wooden bench and looked at the high tower of water in the huge fountain. People waded in the fountain and some sunbathed on the fountain’s wide rim. A few people stood looking out at the two converging rivers. He knew where the two rivers converged began the Ohio. He looked at the river he faced. Sunlight glinted off the dark, rippling water. A boat with four young people around his age came slowly down the river. The two young women were on their stomachs on a blanket on the bow with the tops of their two piece swim suits undone, browning their backs in the sun. On the far bank two engines slowly pulled a long line of railroad cars. No end in sight. A small, yellow plane on floats taxied on the river. It flew under one bridge then up over the next one. A young couple strolled past. They were holding hands. Her long hair was alive in the wind. She looked up into the face of her companion and then laughed at something he said. Sitting on the wooden bench, the young man took a deep breath and closed his eyes against the sun. The sun was warm on his face and a breeze was gentle on his arms.

“Have you made any plans?” his father had asked him. The older man and the young man sat in chairs in the young man’s room.

“No, sir.”

“You’re welcome to come down and work in the garage with me. It’s either you or someone else.”

“Thanks, Dad.”

“Or you could go to college now and get paid for it.”

“I’ve been thinking about that, too.”

“To tell you the truth, son, your mother and I are a little concerned about you sleeping all day and then staying up all night listening to the stereo. We hardly ever see you.”

“I play it as low as I can.”

“No, no we never hear it. It’s just that we’re not use to seeing you so inactive.”

“All right you two up there. Supper’s on the table.”

The young man walked back to the Y. He knew he was getting better.

The End    

********************

Short Story Ideas That Make Readers Happy

The Gazette Is #1

Hello, hello, hello my brother and sister bloggers and flash fiction writers and the rest of you cats out there.  The word “cats” really dates me, doesn’t it?  But the Old Soldier doesn’t mind being dated.  The Old Soldier is a survivor.  Today is a day of celebration.

It’s a day of celebration because according to Google, The Gazette is the #1 flash fiction blog in the world!  If you Google flash fiction you will find The Gazette on page one.  As of today, The Gazette is #4 on the first page.  The other three links are not blogs.  So, there you have it.  The Old Soldier must be doing something right.

Are you a writer?  You want to make a few bucks?  Check out Textbroker.

So, that’s it for Thursday.  The Old Soldier is celebrating with a six-pack of Past Blue Ribbon…

Scott Delaney is the Old Soldier’s alter ego.  I really lived what Scott goes through.  The thing about the following story is that it’s all exposition.  It flys in the face of “show don’t tell.”  It’s a perfect example of how not to write a flash fiction story.

**********************

Jocks And Ballerinas 

When Scott Delaney turned eighteen he joined the army to get away from killing his father who would get drunk and beat his mother. He attended Point Park College in Pittsburgh just before he joined the army and went to Vietnam when the college was still a two-year institution, a junior college. After he was discharged from the army and after he enrolled and finally dropped out of Duquesne University in Pittsburgh he hung around at Point Park College for several years. He wasn’t an official student but many of the professors knew of his serious interest in writing short stories. His youngest brother was president of the student body. Scott was admired by his youngest brother who introduced him all around. Scott became well-known on campus. He was issued a special library card and could take out books just like a student. He carried his notebook and collections of the writings of Hemingway, F. Scott Fitzgerald, John O’Hara and Gertrude Stein everywhere he went. He usually sat at the same table in the snack bar, writing in his notebook and watching the students.

By chance he had picked an empty table where the female ballet dance majors always sat. He was surprised when several student ballerinas in black leotards and white tights, their dance bags slung from a shoulder, came over and sat down. It was their table and that’s where they always sat. So, he always sat there, too. You could tell a student’s major by where the student sat. There was mixing but the groups stayed relatively stable.

The school had a fine baseball team. Many of the jocks on the team belonged to this one fraternity which had the worst reputation of any group on campus. Sometimes in the snack bar they really carried on occasionally bringing their bats and taking full swings at imaginary baseballs. Scott was always afraid they’d smack someone walking by. It never did happen while he was there. He became friendly with the president of the fraternity. He joined the fraternity as a “social” member.

The president of the fraternity was no saint but he was constantly worried about the wilder behavior of some of the other members. It was funny. It was like riding a souped up truck with one foot on the gas and the other foot on the brake.

Still, to be a dancer or a jock you had to work through a lot of pain to become any good. Not until years later, long after he had stopped hanging around Point Park College and was putting together his first book of short stories, did Scott Delaney realize he liked jocks and ballet dancers for the same reason.

Short Story Ideas That Work

Finding Your Place on The Web

Older Woman/Younger Man

Hello, hello, hello my brother and sister bloggers and flash fiction writers.  The Old Soldier has the Tuesday edition of The Gazette for you.  I hope everyone is doing well.  The snow is slowly melting here in Pittsburgh and tomorrow my social security check arrives which means the Old Soldier can get a six-pack of beer to celebrate making it through another month.  When you get to be the Old Soldier’s age and you’re still kickin’ that’s worth celebrating.  I got no aches and I got no pains.  I might even pay a visit to Del’s Italian Restaurant in Bloomfield later on in the week to see my peeps.  They haven’t seen the Old Soldier in weeks.  I’ve been MIA…

  In this edition of The Gazette is a story from the archives and another poem from Lady Sunshine

Now you know The Gazette is looking for a few good flash fiction writers to publish as Guest Writers.  And every once in a while one of those Guest Writers will be awarded a $15.00 honorarium.  That’s right.  Enough for two cheap six-packs of beer.  For all the details just click on the Open Contest/Submissions tab at the top of the page.  The Gazette does not accept poetry, yet.  The Old Soldier is waiting to see what the response is to the poetry of Lady Sunshine.  I like her poetry.  I hope you like it, too.  Cick on her link to read her entire body of work.  Or all of the work that she has on her site.

The next edition of The Gazette, the best damn flash fiction blog on the web, will be published on Thursday.  This is the Old Solier reporting from Oakland in the heart of Pittsburgh.

********************

Love Lies Bleeding

Where does my heart lie?

In the depths of your eyes?
Or the delicate, whispered sighs?
When your anguished soul cries?

Lay in love’s bed
Rest your weary crown
As I kiss your forehead
Slowly, your sorrows drown

Languorous lips linger

As true love lies bleeding  
In breathless surrender
An aching soul seething

Give in to love’s lust
Yield implicitly to its trust
Delight in its torrid caress
As our twin hearts coalesce

Lady Sunshine lives and writes poetry in California.

********************

Forbidden Love

It was a warm, sunny April morning in downtown Pittsburgh. The letter Frank Everett got the day before from the State Civil Service Commission stated that only 10 people in the County of Allegheny had scored higher than he had on the State Civil Service Test. That meant he’d probably have a good job within the year. Once he got the job nobody could say he was a loser, a loser like his old man. How his mother stayed with his father Frank could never understand. His mother and father were just from a different generation. Frank was still in his twenties, but he’d never gone to college and found he could only get dead end jobs like the one he had now. Well, all that was going to change. He’d even brought the letter to work to show Rita. Rita Lopez was the only thing he would miss from his present job. Frank started putting down the stools on the dry floor. Rita would be in any minute.

Image via Wikipedia

With everything in place, Frank sat on a stool at the bar and smoked a cigarette. It was the best part of the day. Soon he wouldn’t have to work at night. He wouldn’t be on Public Assistance. When Rita came in he could always get a couple of beers on the house before the bar opened. Today he was hoping Rita would give him more than just a couple of beers. Rita might be forty-five but she was hot. She made her tips on low cut, short dresses that got even lower when she bent down to get a beer from the cooler for a customer. And there were her beautiful legs. Frank heard a key in the front door.

In a moment Rita came through the swinging doors. She was wearing her trade mark low cut, short dress with black pantyhose and white tennis shoes. “I put on the show for the customers,” she told him once. “But I’m not going to have my feet hurt.”

“Hi, Rita.”

“Frankie, the place is so nice and clean as usual. Would you like a beer? I’ll have a cigarette with you.”

“Thanks.”

She put her things away behind the bar and then bent down into a cooler to get his beer. The neck of her dress came open. She wasn’t wearing a bra. She had never had children. Many young women would be envious of her breasts. She looked up at him and saw him looking.

“My Frankie gets his own private show.”

“You’re my private dancer.”

She opened a bottle of Iron City and put it and a glass in front of him.

He said, “I got something to show you.”

“Good news?”

“I got the letter.” He put his cigarette in the ashtray on the bar.

“Let me see?” she said.

She came around and sat facing him on a stool. He took the letter from a pocket of his jeans and gave it to her. She unfolded it and began to read. Concentrating on the letter she crossed her beautiful legs, the short dress riding even higher. The black pantyhose accented the beauty of her legs. Frank thought of how young women didn’t seem to wear pantyhose any longer. He wondered what would happen if he reached out and squeezed her thigh. He turned to face her.

“Frankie, this is wonderful news.” She looked up at him, happy for him. “Oh, I’m going to miss you.”

“I won’t miss this place but I’ll miss you.”

“You’ll meet some nice sweet young thing and forget all about Rita.”

“No,” he said. “I really will miss you.” The bar seemed very quiet.

“That’s so sweet.”

“Rita?”

“Yes?”

He reached out and squeezed her thigh. There was a moment when nothing happened. There was only the thrill of the feel of her pantyhose and the warmth of her thigh. Then Frank felt a stinging sensation. She had slapped him. The entire left side of his face was stinging.

“Oh, Frankie, I’m so sorry.”

“No, no. That’s all right.”

“Why would you do such a thing?”

“I stepped out of line.”

“You don’t want to make a pass at me. Frankie, I’m old enough to be your mother.”

“No, it’s all right.”

He began to feel strangely more confident. He thought the slap had given him a certain advantage.

“You were right to slap me. But you’re not my mother. And I’m a man. And you’re a woman.”

He put his hand back on her thigh. She looked down at his hand. He saw she was breathing deeper. He got off his stool and uncrossed her legs. She was looking down at his hands as if she was hypnotized. He reached under her short dress and ran his hands slowly up and down her outer thighs, thrilling to the feel of her pantyhose and the warmth of her body. 

“Frankie, what are you doing?”

“Something I’ve always wanted to do.”

“Frankie, this isn’t right.” She rested her hands on his shoulders…

Moments later Rita was on her back in a booth.

“That’s it,” she said. “That’s what Rita wants. That’s what I need.”  She moaned.

“Rita, you don’t know how long I’ve wanted to do this.”

“Do me, Frankie.  Do me.”

Later that day Frank Everett and Rita Lopez began to make plans for the future.

Short Story Ideas That Work

Finding Your Place on The Web

New Flash Fiction by Hannah Turner

Good morning, good morning, good morning my brother and sister bloggers and writers.  It’s the Old Soldier here with the Friday edition of the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette.  The Gazette is published every Monday, Tuesday, Thursday and Friday.  So, the next edition doesn’t come out again until Monday; but today’s edition is special.  It’s special for two reason.  We have new flash fiction and poetry.  That’s right.  I said poetry.

Now I’m not talkin’ any old poetry.  I’m talkin’ poetry by Lady Sunshine.  The Old Soldier discovered Lady Sunshine’s poetry on Triond.  Lady Sunshine’s poetry is about many things.  It can be about nature.  It can be about love.  It can be about romance and it can be about sex.  I’m sure you will enjoy her poetry…

Hannah Turner is new to The Gazette.  When I first approached her about publishing her story “Window Displays” she wondered how her story would fit into The Gazette.  I didn’t ask her what she meant by that.  Maybe she thought The Gaztte only published erotica.  That’s not true.  The Gazette publishes good flash fiction.  Period.  The Gazette wants stories about life.

And if you are a flash fiction writer, let me remind you about the on going contest at The Gazette.  Click on the Open Contest/Submissions tab at the top of the page for the details.

So, tell your friends about The Gazette, the best flash fiction blog on the web.  This is the Old Soldier reporting from Pittsburgh.  Keep writing.  Have a good weekend.  I’ll see you Monday.  Hey!  The sun is shinning!

********************

Carnal Lust

by Lady Sunshine

Shadows in the dark, fade to crimson red
As scarlet petals scatter, drenched in lust
Dripping in decadent dew, succumbing to desire
Bodies undulating in adoration, bathed in rapture
Flesh flickering upon each other, ravished by delight
Shimmering in titillation, bound by wanton pleasure
As breathless cries linger, whispering sweet sins
Reveling in the ravishment, drowning in debauchery
Clamoring from love’s abyss, seething in decadence
Forever chained to one another, in carnal opulence

Lady Sunshine is a writer from California.

********************

Window Displays

by Hannah Turner

Inside the restaurant, the two are talking. Their seats are mere inches apart, far from an accurate representation of their lives. Completely unaware of the awkwardness that should exist between them, they talk quietly in the softly lit room. They are the first to arrive at the table, both wanted a moment to think about the gravity of what they were about to do, the night they were about to live. 

Their eyes never quite meet, but they don’t have to, the two already know what sits near them. She’s older than she looks, she lost some weight before this night. Exhausted from running many miles, she bought one of those hideous elliptical machines, only to have it glare at her from the corner of the bedroom. Instead she just took her dogs on runs. They had aged, yet so had she, so their strides matched. She had shopped for weeks for the perfect dress, the perfect jewelry. This was one of those moments that people don’t remember the food or the wine but the appearances of the people that matter. How they acted, were they sad, or were the elated? That’s what people noticed. But these two weren’t the stars tonight, just supporting roles, but all the same they mattered. They mattered to everyone in the room, but tomorrow they might feel a little less meaningful. 
He had lost weight too, just not for the same reasons. His had slipped off his frame without any urging on his part, but by the force of an enemy much stronger than self-image. His skin had paled a little, his waist had shrunk, his face looked hollowed out, as if he was a mere fragment of who he had been, well, who he had been before. His hair was still dark, while hers was deceptively blonde by agents other than natural blessing. Their hands, not as far apart as you’d expect, told their stories. His were worn from the constant compulsion to help, to fix. Hers were soft from the years she thought she didn’t need them, but had been growing strong since the day she realized she could, in fact, be on her own. For the others in the room, they would look good, for their age. But to each other, they looked good for any age. There must be a point where resentment turns to acceptance, and they had reached it. 
This night would mark the ominous end that had been looming for months, and the appreciated beginning for something else, something different than either of them had ever known.
 
She was ready, he was accepting it. But that was how it had always been, even when they weren’t as distanced as they were now. She had always been more open for change, and while he didn’t run from difference, he didn’t welcome it. Tonight would be the biggest change either of them had encountered since, well since that year.  Others begin to arrive. The two welcome those they know, introduce themselves to those that they don’t. 
Another woman sits beside him, she leans in to kiss his cheek. He compliments her dress, and the woman blushes, happy that he still notices. While he is smiling, he notices the younger man enter the room. 
He watches as the younger man sits beside her, kissing her temple. She fusses with his tie, he laughs and shakes his head at her, as if to say You’ll never change. The younger man swats her hand away as she reaches to swipe a stray hair back from his forehead.
She laughs, and he notices although he is supposed to be listening to the woman beside him. It’s not that he wants her anymore, he doesn’t. The idea of being with her is so distant and stale to him, he can barely remember the feeling. He’s happy, he has someone who was meant for him. But there is something about her that will always make him pause.
 More come to the table. Some they’ve known for awhile, some they’ve met just because of this time. Everyone around them smiles at them separately, one smile for him, one for her. They are separate islands, only the fraying borders reminding them that they were once close.
 
Sometimes I do this, watch them, because I’m afraid to become like them, but also afraid that they’ll slip away if I don’t watch for awhile.
I stand outside the restaurant, waiting for my friend to arrive before I enter. Any interaction they shared is now distracted by the bustling people around them, a distant memory already in their minds. 
I hear him coming up behind me, his arms grab me from behind as he leans me into him and hugs me. He knows what I’m doing, he kisses my shoulder blade as I savor these last few moments. He’s ready for what’s next, he’s been ready. But it’s those two inside the restaurant that made me hesitate. As I watch them for a little longer, he kisses my neck, trails upward to my ear, and then once more on the corner of my eye. He sighs in my ear, making a chain with his arms that knot at my stomach. After one more glance at the two, I pull my gaze away and turn my head slightly to look at him. 
With a cute smile, (man, he’s adorable) he pecks me once on the lips and pulls me around, turning my back to the two. We kiss for a minute, the traffic noise morphing from the busy sharp sounds into just a soft hum in the background. 
After we pull away, I reach up to hug him. He’s taller than I am, thank God, so I can wear heels around him as much as I want without feeling like a tall ostrich beside him. As I let go of his neck, he kisses my forehead. I turn back towards the restaurant, the moment I had observed now long gone.  The two were leaning away from each other, talking to complete opposite ends of the room. As much as they made me hesitate, they also helped me say yes. I hold Luke’s hand, and together we walk toward the restaurant. We walk inside, and I instantly see them again.
It’s been fifteen years since my parents have sat so close, fifteen years since they sat together in our living room and told me they were getting a divorce. The woman beside my dad, my stepmother, smiles at me as I enter with Luke holding my hand. The guy beside my mom, my not-so-little brother, high-fives Luke and smiles at me. I sit down, and start to enjoy my rehearsal dinner, the cold diamond feeling more like home than it ever has.
********************
Hannah Turner is currently an English major at Auburn University. In heart though, she’s still in Atlanta the best city in the South. Her stories have been published in numerous print and online journals, and she is slowly constructing a writing website to display all of her work. 
*********************

A New Flash Fiction Contest

We all deal with relationships.  There are relationships between friends, colleagues and lovers.  The flash fiction stories you will find here on the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette are about relationships.  Especially relationships between men and women, boyfriends and girlfriends and husbands and wives; but The Gazette deals with more than just the relationships.  The Gazette deals with, how does the flash fiction writer bring these relationships to life.

Flash fiction captures a very short period in time in life when something important happens.  The best flash fiction implies what went on before the story began and implies what may happen after the story ends.  It’s a beautiful thing…

The Old Soldier is proud of getting his MFA in fiction writing from the University of Pittsburgh in 2006 at the age of 59.  Yes, I graduated from Boyce Campus, Community College of Allegheny County in the 70s; but to be accepted at Pitt as a second semester sophomore nearly 30 years later and to go on to be accepted in the graduate program was a dream come true.  Sometimes dreams do come true.  It was flash fiction that got me into the grad program.  Never doubt that flash fiction is a true art form.

********************

Why Do We Read Flash Fiction?

I think short stories are a way for humanity to keep an informal record of itself. We want to know where we have been and maybe where we might be going; this helps to give us some sense of control over our destiny. But things are pretty crazy now. Events overwhelm us. We suffer from information overload. So many things should have been done yesterday; but we still need our short stories. They help keep us sane, human. It’s just that now there’s even less time for reading stories then there was twenty years ago. And we still want our stories to tell us something about the human condition even if it’s something small. Stories still must have a protagonist and something must be at stake; and something must be different at the end.

This is why we read flash fiction. This is why it’s a great time to write flash fiction.

Short Story Ideas That Work

Blogging: Don’t Let Tags Ruin Your Blog

Should Your Blog Accept Submissions

Don’t forget to enter the Open Contest at the top of the page.  The prize is $15.00.

The Down Side Of Writing Flash Fiction

I’ve dedicated 15 years of my life to writing and understanding flash fiction.

Follow

Get every new post delivered to your Inbox.

Join 831 other followers