The Old Soldier has written some flash fiction sex stories that are out-and-out porn. There is no way of getting around that.
It wasn’t always that way. For years I tried to imitate Hemingway. And Hemingway is Literature with a capital “L”. But literary flash fiction was not bringing readers to the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette. So, I added naked women, articles on sex and flash fiction full of sex.
The hits started pouring in. And not just from men. The largest percentage of the readers of the PFFG are women.
I think, how explicit should your flash fiction sex story be? is the wrong question. The right question is, how well written is your flash fiction sex story?
The following story from the archives is one of the most explicit stories that the Old Soldier has ever written. Enjoy. And keep reading and keep writing that flash fiction.
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The $2,000 Payday
The video begins. An attractive young woman in a black dress and black, strappy heels sits back against a row of snow-white, fluffy pillows on a large bed covered with snow-white sheets. There are paintings of beautiful landscapes in frames on the wall above the headboard of the bed. The young woman smiles and has a look of expectancy and excitement on her face.
“Alright,” a male voice says. “You’re a sophomore at a local college which will remain nameless.” The video shakes a little. It is obvious that the male speaking is using a hand-held video camera. “Can we say the college is not for dummies?”
“No,” she says. “It’s not for dummies.”
“What did we agree to call you?”
“Bella.”
“Bella. I like that. It’s not your real name.”
“No.”
“Bella, have you ever had sex with ten men at the same time?”
“I’ve only had one real boyfriend and we broke up.”
“You are about to service ten cocks.”
Bella looks around the room and does a quick count of the naked men who are off camera. Many of the naked men are playing with themselves and several already have serious erections. A couple of the men seem to be in their 20s but most seem to be in their 30s and 40s and one appears to be in his 50s. Bella laughs.
“Now, Bella, this is your third video for me, your first gangbang. These are my friends. They help me out in the gangbangs. We’re all nice guys. We’re not here to hurt you. We’re here to show you a good time. Are you nervous?”
“This is really exciting.”
“In our very first emails you said you liked life experiences.”
“Yes, I do.”
“I think you will remember this one. Alright, fellas. I see one hot nineteen-year-old woman who wants to make your acquaintance. Let’s get started.”
By the eleven-minute mark of the video, Bella is naked, except for her shoes, on her back, her head turned to her left as she sucks on a swollen penis, her eyes closed, her right hand stroking another swollen penis as one of the men keeps plunging his swollen penis in her vagina, the lips of her vulva prominent, her pubic hairs shaved. Every once in a while the flash of a camera goes off.
Hands tenderly, almost lovingly move over her white skin. The men talk and joke among themselves. Sometimes Bella stops sucking to laugh, too. The jokes are never derogatory to her. The men constantly complement what she is doing, how sweet she is and how hot she is. Bella even joins in the banter and the men laugh appreciatively at her jokes. But she has little time for jokes. The atmosphere is very relaxed. The men urge each other on and they urge Bella on.
“Share the mouth, honey,” the videoman says. Bella turns her head to her right and sucks on that penis. “That’s a good girl.”
“Look how pretty her skin is.”
“This pussy is so tight.”
“She is definitely marriage material.”
Bella’s breathing becomes more and more labored. Low grunts begin to escape from her. Now and then she has to stop sucking to catch her breath. Bella is once again sucking on the swollen penis on her left.
The man on Bella’s right asks, “Does she like cum?”
The videoman says, “She loves it.”
The man on her right is stroking his swollen penis. “Bella,” he says, “I have a load for you.”
Bella stops sucking the man on her left. Opens her eyes, turns her head to the right, opens her mouth and the man ejaculates in her mouth. She turns to the camera, her mouth open to reveal the cum inside and then she swallows it down.
An Amateur Does Her First Adult Gangbang Video. As One Man Repeatedly Works His Penis In And Out Of Her Vagina Another Man Cums In Her Mouth. Several Other Men Wait Their Turn Off Camera.
In the space of two minutes she swallows four more mouthfuls of cum.
All this time the man between her wide open legs has been plunging his swollen penis deep in her vagina, her body in constant motion from his repeated thrusts. Now he also uses his left thumb to massage her clitoris.
Bella’s grunts have become louder and closer together. Now she ignores the swollen penises around her face. She raises her head to look down between her legs. She holds two fistfuls of the white sheets. She closes her eyes. Her face contorts.
“Oh, shit,” she says. “Oh, shit. Oh, shit. Oh, fuck. Oh, fuck. Oh, fuck.”
The men urge her on. “Bella, go for it…The camera loves a cumming girl…Make her cum…Make her moan.” The camera flashes are now constant.
Between grunts and moans Bella gives one last, “Oh, fuck.” Her body tenses forward. The room is strangely silent, except for the clicking camera flashes going off, as the men watch her. And the video camera distinctly catches the subtle trembling of her breasts. One second. Two seconds. Three seconds. Four seconds. Five seconds.
Bella catches her breath and collapses back against the white sheets. The action continues for forty more minutes. Sometimes Bella is on her back and sometimes she’s on her hands and knees; but there is nearly always a swollen penis working her mouth and one working her vagina at the same time. When the men have orgasms they ejaculate in her mouth. Stray cum streaks her face. During the video Bella swallows 15 loads of cum.
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At the end of the video Bella has showered, changed clothes and now sits in the office with the man who shot the video.
The man says, “Okay, I’m filming the interview. That’s why these cameras are set up. So, what did you think?”
“I loved, loved, loved it. I’m a happy girl. I’m exhausted.”
“You really earned your money.”
“I think I did.”
“I’m not blowing smoke up your dress. This is one of the hottest videos I’ve shot in over 10 years.”
“Why thank you so much.”
“How many orgasms did you have?”
“How many? Around five or six. I stopped counting after three.”
“What would you do if your parents or friends found one of the videos you’ve done for me?”
“I don’t know. Deny it’s me.”
“Well, you’ve done three videos for me.”
“I know. I’m not an amateur anymore. I guess this is the end of my career.”
“Everyone in the business is not as nice as I am.”
“I know.”
“Or have nice friends like I do.”
“I know.”
“I have some papers for you to sign. You’ll be on your way in ten minutes. Finish your education. That’s the best thing for you to do. Say goodbye to our viewing audience.”
Bella looks into one of the cameras, wiggles the fingers of her right hand and then blows the audience a kiss.
The End
