Flash Fiction: Shower by Heather Kinnane

Woman As Art

The water trickled down over his nipple and she licked it playfully, grimacing as the taste of soap registered in her brain. 

“Ha!” He laughed. “That’s what you get for not waiting till I’m done.”  

She slapped him playfully with the flannel, and he leaned in for a kiss, soft at first, then harder as his hunger grew. His soapy hands roamed her body, lathering up her breasts and tweaking her nipples. His fingers settled on her soft spot, teasing and tickling until her knees grew weak and her head light. 

As her body came down from the high she clung to him, her tongue probing his, her hands wandering, searching, finding him erect. 

“Mmm…” She gave him a cheeky look as she pulled away from his kisses. “Your turn!” 

She knelt before him, her hands stroking the soft skin covering his hard member. Her tongue ran the length base to head, swirling around the tip before making the return journey.  She took him in her mouth, opening her throat to take more of his length and began to work him, enjoying the groans of ecstasy escaping his lips. He came, and she savoured the sweet essence on her tongue before taking the thick warm liquid down her throat.

The End

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Heather Kinnane dabbles in all sorts of genres, though her preference is fantasy. She has only recently begun to explore erotic fiction. She lives in Australia.   

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Ladies, Here Are 10 Great Ideas For Your Erotic Fiction

The Old Soldier has published several erotic flash fiction stories by women (and men) and he hopes to publish more.  If you are a woman and you want to submit an erotic short story to this magazine and get paid $10.00 keep this one important tip in mind: No matter how explicit the sex is in a short story, the best erotic stories are really not about sex; they’re about relationships.

Okay, here’s the list.  To keep the list from wandering all over the place, I thought we would just list the first time that you (a woman) did something with a man.

  1. The first time you masturbated to orgasm in front of a man just so he could watch.
  2. The first time a man gave you an orgasm by cunnilingus.
  3. The first time you performed fellatio.
  4. The first time you swallowed.
  5. The first time you did it doggie style.
  6. The first time you took a bath or a shower with a man.
  7. The first time a man brought you to orgasm with just his hand.
  8. The first time you had an orgasm when you were on top.
  9. The first time you took off all your clothes in front of a man; or you let him help you take them off.
  10. The first time a man touched your breasts when you still had all your clothes on.

The flash fiction story in its simplest form is made up of a significant event with closure (resolution).  You now have 10 significant events.  You only need to add closure to make a flash fiction story out of one or more of these ideas on the list.  Just make sure that the story has some sort of tension and that the resolution resolves that tension.

The submissions tab for fiction is at the top of the page.  Submissions are still open for September.  Please read and follow the guidelines. 

And good luck!

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Beer, Eggs And Flash Fiction

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Having beer and eggs for breakfast is what happens when you live alone too long.  Hello, bloggers, readers, writers and my Flash Fiction Fanatics.  The Old Soldier just finished off two eggs straight up with a piece of bread and sausage and a couple of cans of Old Milwaukee beer and now I’m ready for action.

It’s a sunny afternoon in the 50s and I have a load of clothes in the dryer downstairs.  One day this week I’ll take a bus down to the Federal Building and begin the process of filing for my military pension.

Enough about me.

What about you?  Are you a writer?  I publish mainstream, literary and erotic fiction.  Last month the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette got over 3,500 hits so people will see your work.  Plus, I rotate the stories back and forth between the archives and the Home Page.

You can’t beat that with a stick!  So, send me something.  The Submissions tab is at the top of the page.

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