Flash Fiction Writers, Open The Eyes Of Your Readers

 

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Seeing is believing.  It’s true in life and it’s true in flash fiction.  The writer who can use words in such a way that his or her readers can vividly see what is going on in the story has an enviable talent for a special kind of writing.  That writing is known as “show don’t tell” writing.

How does “show don’t tell” writing work?

The writer uses a steady stream of specific, concrete visual details.  These can be actions or things that we can detect with our sense of sight.

In this way the reader actually “sees” the story on the little movie screen of his or her imagination.

You can’t beat that with a stick!

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Interior view, Carnegie Library of Pittsburgh,...

Interior view, Carnegie Library of Pittsburgh, 4400 Forbes Avenue, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, USA. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

I never did make it to the Carnegie Library of Pittsburgh yesterday; but I have to go today to return a book that is due.  I don’t want to pay a penny for an over due book.  That money is better in my pocket than it is in the pocket of the public library.

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Speaking of money, the Old Soldier watched the financial news yesterday on television.  I’ve always been working-class and now that I’m retired I’ve become a financial news junkie.  And for good reason.

The Euro zone is going to give the banking system of Spain a bailout; but the unemployment rate there is already around 24%.  In my humble opinion, no austerity program will work without some economic growth.  The United States faces the same challenge.

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English: image edited to hide card’s owner name. author: Arturo Portilla (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

I recently got a letter from the Social Security Administration saying that the State of Pennsylvania was no longer going to help to pay my Medicare medical insurance.  The money will now come out of my Social Security.

Ouch!

No doubt a lot of other retirees in Pennsylvania got the same letter.  Now do you see why we all have to pay more attention to the news that affects our money?

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International Banks Caught Manipulating Interest Rates

Interest Rates

Interest Rates (Photo credit: 401(K) 2012)

And now several major international banks are being investigated for illegally setting interest rates, making billions of dollars in profits for themselves while costing their customers billions of dollars in loses.

There are still plenty of reasons why middle-class and working-class people all over the world need the Occupy Movement.

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A Tribute To Donna Summer

Love Is the Healer

Love Is the Healer (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Donna Summer died on 17 May 2012.  She was 63 years old.  Younger than the Old Soldier.  I was always a rocker.  But I distinctly remember doing the Philly Hustle around the 70s or early 80s in a local bar that is still a few blocks from my apartment building.

Disco was king.

And Donna Summer was the Queen of Disco.  I remember some of the groups from that era: Thelma Houston, Sister Sledge, Alicia Bridges, Chic, Laballe, Average White Band, Gloria Gaynor and many others.

But Donna Summer reigned over all of them.  Her music still makes the Old Soldier put on his dancing shoes.

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European Leaders Move To Solve The Euro Crisis

European leaders of the Euro zone have decided to re-finance the banking systems of several European nations by infusing money directly into the banks and by passing the governments of the nations asking for the bailouts.

Français : Zone euro 2009 ; bleu foncé : de ju...

Français : Zone euro 2009 ; bleu foncé : de jure ; bleu pâle : de facto (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

This seems to be good news on two fronts.  The nations will not have debt added to their sovereign bonds and the banks will get the money they need.

Whether or not working-class Americans, like me, are paying attention to the Euro zone crisis this is good news for everyone.  Of course, this does not solve the problem.  Cutting costs and economic growth are the answers, but this is a win for our side. 

Oh, yes, the Old Soldier knows a little bit about the international banking and financial system and he is trying to learn more about it every day.  I have a pension that is affected by the markets.  If you’re retired maybe you should pay more attention, too.

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Blogging: Or Jumping Into The Fire

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English: seo block (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

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The Old Soldier has been experimenting with SEO.  For a long time I didn’t even know what SEO stood for.  But once I figured out it stood for Search Engine Optimization I thought I had better get with the program and try to use it to my advantage if I wanted to be a serious blogger.

Well, my only definite success with SEO is that I make sure that the term “flash fiction” is in every post I publish.  And of course, I use the term as a tag for every post, too.

So, when people search Google for “flash fiction” this blog usually shows up on the first page as one of the ten top sites in the world for flash fiction.  That’s all I know about SEO.  I hope this information was useful.  Most of you probably know about SEO anyway.  The Old Soldier is just trying to be helpful.

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Hello hello hello, all my brother and sister bloggers, readers, writers and Flash Fiction Fanatics from all over the world.  You know who you are.  It’s not even 8:00 a.m. in Pittsburgh.  The high will be 77 and the day will be sunny.  The blogging day has begun.

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Cyprus And Spain Ask For Bailouts

The Old Soldier woke up this morning to news reports that the island nation of Cyprus and Spain have made it official.  Both nations have asked the Euro zone to help save their banking systems.

The leaders of the Euro zone will meet in Brussels on Thursday and Friday.  Investors all over the world are holding their breath as we edge closer to a world-wide financial disaster.  Very few people who I know seem to be paying attention to this; but it makes the Old Soldier very uneasy.

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Well, there is nothing that the Old Soldier can do about the drama in Europe.  The only thing that I can do is to keep blogging and hope for the best.  Speaking of the best, you will find some of the best literary, mainstream and erotic flash fiction on the Internet right here in this little blog.

Explore the site.  Click the follow button.  Tell all your friends about the excitement that is the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette.

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