A Sure-Fire Way To Keep Your Reader Reading

Woman As Art

Woman As Art

Explanation, better known as exposition, is a useful and necessary device in every flash fiction writer’s tool box.  What you don’t want to do is to explain too much.  When you explain too much, what you are really doing is spoon-feeding the reader.

And that’s no fun for the reader.

Flash fiction is so short that you need the story to be fun for the reader, because the reader has to help you complete the story.  And to get the reader to help you complete the story, you have to make reading the story fun.

How do you make reading the story fun?

One way is to make the story a stream of revelation.  Which means the less you have to explain the better.  And this means you present much of the story in real-time.  You the writer must use all your skills to paint a moving picture that tells the story.  Concentrate on what your characters say and do.

Reader of novels

Reader of novels (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

If the moving picture that you create engages the imagination of your reader, he or she will complete the story, adding all the necessary things that you had to imply.  Revelation lets the reader “discovery” what is going on.

This is why in the writing of the flash fiction story, revelation is usually, not always, but usually better than explanation.

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Memory

The writer listened
He heard voices calling him
He wrote them all down

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How To Put Theater Into Your Karaoke Performance

Woman As Art

Here is the first installment of “Karaoke As Performance Art.”

The Old Soldier has been an avid karaoke singer for at least 20 years.  People tell me I’m pretty good.  I don’t ask them. 

In this series I will share with you what I have learned about being a karaoke singer.

Karaoke is popular because anyone can do it.  And it usually takes place in an establishment where alcoholic beverages are available.  Actually, karaoke and booze go together.  I could never get up and sing in front of a bunch of strangers if I was sober.

But you never want to sing drunk.  You just want to drink enough to be brave and relaxed enough to perform.

English: Karaoke stub icon

English: Karaoke stub icon (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Most people who sing karaoke are mediocre singers; but that’s why karaoke is so much fun.  If you happen to be a good singer there are things you can do to take your performance to the next level.

  1. Make eye contact with your audience.
  2. Body language is important.  You don’t want to stand frozen like a deer in headlights.
  3. Actually know the words of your song at least well enough so that discrete glances at the screen are all you need to keep your place.
  4. Practise at home.  And you don’t need to own a karaoke machine to do it.  Although you may want to do it when no one else is around.

Do these four things and you will be on your way to karaoke as performance art.  I’ll have more for you in the next installment.

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The Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette is an online magazine of serious writing and brazen sexuality.  Just look at the front page.

Creative Writing: Ways To Recharge Your Imagination

Let’s not call it writer’s block.  But there are times when a writer has to recharge his or her imaginative batteries.

I’s the Old Soldier here with another issue of the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette, the most fun reading you can find in a publication that deals with flash fiction.

How’s everyone doing?

It’s around noon in Pittsburgh.  The high will be 85 on a lovely, sunny day.  I haven’t been out yet.  I want to get this post up first.  So far I’ve had three cans of beer, a fish sandwich with lots of hot sauce and I’ve watched Face The Nation and some other Sunday news show on television about the 2012 American presidential election, the Euro crisis and Facebook’s IPO (Initial Public Offering). 

underword: flash fiction

underword: flash fiction (Photo credit: piglicker)

What does any of this have to do with writing flash fiction?

Well, a flash fiction writer does not live in a vacuum.  So, it has a lot to do with writing flash fiction.  But a writer’s personal life (family, friends, job, school and significant other) has even more to do with his or her flash fiction.

The Old Soldier would like to leave you with this: live your life to the fullest.  That’s the best way to recharge your creative batteries.  That way, you’ll have something to write about.

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The discouraged Nenene suffering from writer's...

The discouraged Nenene suffering from writer’s block continues to lament the disappearance of Yomiko (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Here’s another way to recharge your creative writing batteries.  Click the follow button or take out a free subscription to the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette.  This publication is definitely not for everyone.  There’s too much sex.  But it might be just right for you.

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